Tormentum II's story, as with its predecessor, is told well on the whole, with an enjoyable cast of main characters, but it does have a couple of missteps. For one, I don't think we needed David to have amnesia. Often, when a game has an amnesiac protagonist, it's in service of building up to some shocking, or at least significant reveal, and it looked like T II was trying to head in that direction and have David realize "Oh, wait, this is my world, I created all this"...except the player already knows that because we saw it in the beginning of the game so the whole amnesia angle really doesn't pay off unless there's something in another ending I missed (to which I should note, I've only played the game once as of writing this, and I intend to replay it at least once more).
Secondly, we have the big question I teased earlier in this review: how exactly do these games relate to each other within the overall chronology or universe of Tormentum? In Dark Sorrow, it's revealed that ||the whole game took place in some kind of purgatory within the Hooded One's psyche||, and as mentioned before T II is a standalone sequel, so they're seemingly unconnected...but then why are there images from the first game on David's computer monitors, not as a blink-and-you'll-miss-it bonus or Easter Egg, but very prominently displayed? Heck, the loading screen that appears every time you run the game shows not David or anything from this game, but Dark Sorrow's Hooded One. There seemed to be a possible hint of a connection in the late stages of T II with a reference to ||"multiple worlds"||, but beyond that, nothing. My initial theory when I first learned of the nature of T II's story was that maybe the Tormentum series was going to be a sort of Twilight Zone of video games: an anthology of otherwise unrelated stories taking place in the twisted world of Tormentum. Having played through Dark Sorrow twice (I replayed it recently to refresh my memory on its story), and now its sequel, I'm still not sure one way or the other if that's the case, and I feel like just a tiny bit more of an explanation would have gone a long way.